I've been working to translate my game Montsegur 1244 from Danish into English. I now have a complete front page to back page English draft worked up. I'd like very much for some of you native English (or US English:) speakers out there to take a look and weed out any danicisms.
Here is my elevator pitch in English for the game:
A story game about burning for your belief
Do you renounce your heretic beliefs and do you wish to receive the forgiveness of the merciful Father?
In March 1244 this question was posed to several hundred Cathars. They had surrendered to the army that had besieged the castle of Montsegur for more than nine months. More than two hundred answered no, and thereby chose death by fire. Who were these people that chose to die for their belief?
In Montsegur 1244 the players collaborate to create a story about who these people were. Each player takes on the role of one of the besieged Cathars who will face the choice between life and faith.
A game for 3-6 players in 3-6 hours.
If you are up to the job, then give me a whisper.