For those of you who may be interested in giving more feedback/new things to try, here I am with my game for the Random Elements Game Design Contest so far. I think its more or less playible, and im in the process of wrangling my players to sit down with it. But I thought I would offer it up to the masses in the hopes of some feedback. I originally had this over at totrpg.com but after a weekend of nothing, I thought I would share it here too.
If you would like to take a look here it ishttp://www.freewebs.com/ggnewb/Self-inflicted.pdf
If you look at it, giving some feedback would be helpful.
Thanks for your time and interest